cloudandis's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Vending Machine]

Nicely done, althought the line quality could use some work. THe animation seemed pretty smooth, but the quality of the props and character did not support it. Other than that, the comedy kept me interested. Nice work!

['Arrow to the Knee']

Nice! I love the animation in this and how each frame was timed. However, a but of work could be used on the line art and coloring. I understand not all artists color wtihin the lines, but it would make it a little neater. And you got your point across pretty well. That joke is so old now XD but people still use it.

[Bedfellows - Gary]

Nicely done! Although some of the humor was a tad bit dry, the animation was very smooth. Although, at some points you do need a bit of work on shading. If you ever get the chance to work with gimp image editor, you can use all kinds of interesting effects. Well done.

[The cycle of life]

This is an interesting way of portraying the cycle of life. And honestly it kept me interested the entirety of the film. The only thing I would currently suggest is a little bit of work on the line quality, and going back to re-edit some of your animations. In the last few parts they seemed slightly off an went back a frame at one point. Otherwise, nicely done.

prozure responds:

Thank you, that is why i just created it in a 2 days, like 10 hours or something. I need to get TOOLS - I mean tablet... but i will stay with a mouse for a while ;)). I'm still skilling my mouse drawling. Ty for kind review.

[dark tails vs scythe.]

The re-looping animation is fine, but you may have made an error with your explosion sprites..... or are they supposed to continue as Scythe and tails stop? o.o

[Animal Crackers]

YES. YES. SCREAAAAAAAM.
Oh. what? Animal Crackers....? but.... but that's my childhood....NO. NOOOOOOO.

[Rare At E3]

Not bad. Still needs a bit of works with some of the art and lighting perspectives, but you made your point get across well. :D MAKE BETTER GAMES ASSHOLES. NAO.

[MadoHomu Yuri]

xDD that was rather unexpected. The line art at the beginning is a little scratchy but the rest seemed to do well. it could use a tad bit of shading though. interesting.

3/5